'>>764752
I assume you're looking for feedback or critique?
Your style is pretty fitting for what I can assume the story is about and the facial expressions are done well imo.
I think the change in detail and color from the first two panels to the second two is off-putting and red hoodie's dialogue feels as if intentionally saying something that is hard to swallow so she can have this "deep thought" segment about it.
That being said I really like the color change in the last 3 panels for that, and the final panel looks nice.';

'>>765102
good notes, i dont get a lot of time for long form comic writing so im just trying to hammer down footnotes of their character i guess until i have enough to work with that i can just fumble about with it.

never cared much for comics that start out with the first three pages just being someone walking around.

have doodles of an oc i never draw anymore';

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'>>764752
i know i don't interact as often but i want you to know i really like your art';

'>>766852
i appreciate that, here i was pretty satisfied with this, so here you go';

'>>764752
I can’t say much about the paneling other than it does flow correctly, i didn’t get mixed up on the order.

I would maybe lighten the red on the text in the bottom panels, the contrast between the text and background is low and that makes it harder to read. I like to check my values with digital art by using a black-and-white filter.';

'>>766520
>never cared much for comics that start out with the first three pages just being someone walking around.
I agree with that a lot. Cute oc btw.';

'>>767213
im running out of time for my passions as im driven by a constant need for more money.

the means by which i need to live continues to be stolen from me by underhanded means and a future that i desire seems to be farther and farther away every time i wake up.

the love that i hold that drives me to continue trying is not focusing on what i actually want to achieve and the fears that i will let down those who are important to me ring in my head constantly like the echos of gun fire.';

'>>767655
I want to sniff her sweater.';

'>>767674
here you go';

'>>767722
Hothothothothothot';

'can i read this anywhere?';

'>>767763
currently the only place im uploading it that you would have any luck at keeping track of is here.
https://cohost.org/Unspecified

i dont really have anywhere else that im keeping up with, there's not a lot, since i just never have the time usually but its there.';

'i hope that im retaining an air of artistry in these
i dont know why im suddenly so invested in doodling these little moments but its good practice i guess.';

'>>764752
Hey I'm starting my own, 5 pages in where are you at so I can follow you could use the inspiration.';

'>>768210
Its two posts up';

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'i like how this turned out but unfortunately i edited it and now its all fucky, so this screen cap is the only place it exists';

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'>>769064
can i lick her abs';

'>>769804
Sorry, that ones married';

'>>764752
almost done.

i kinda lost focus on this one';

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'>>766520
Could you try drawing her with a flatter chest? I'm madly in love with her and I want to know if it's just because of her giant tits.';

'>>771022
nah, you can have this though';

'>>771214
how long did it take you to get to this skill level anon-sama?';

'>>771216
well lets see...
my earliest memory artwise was scribbling down a shitty drawing of a snowball fight in crayon during kindergarten, i remember thinking that it was annoying i was coloring snow in white crayon on a brownish felt-like construction paper.

im almost 30 now so... give or take 29 years.

i dont think i actually started getting "good" until about 19 and even then if i look back at it now its gonna be so shit i just know it.';

'I adore the way you draw faces anon, would you ever take commissions?';

'>>771482
i mean i guess i kinda do?
but i dont really wanna dox my legal name to just whoever, maybe if i can figure out how to set up kofi again, that seemed to work ok.';

'>>771487
https://ko-fi.com/unspecified
i think i set this up right?';

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'testing a different brush';

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'>>769878
done';

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'i finally saw all of evangelion recently
i like asuka';

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'Your art is nice but all of your skulls look like this guy';

'>>777813
He does! He's lying!!!!';

'>>778569
i dont believe you';

'>>778569
kek';

'>>778569
drew this special for you after i picked all the smegma off my cock';

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'i havent actually drawn in a while, i feel rusty';

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'>>779322
>>780373
fuck yeah';

'>>780377';

'did for a friend';

'>>764752
I like the style! and the paneling could be improved with very simple increases to the black space between panels. The only other change I would prefer is using a standardized typeface as opposed to the handwriting, but thats entirely up to taste. Keep it up!';